Amend Education Academy
An Elementary Classroom In a Slum
Stanza 1
The poet says that the condition of the children in a
slum school is pathetic. Their world is far removed from the open,
healthy environment. They are as unwanted as the rootless weeds. Their
hair is unkempt and they have pale faces which clearly indicate their
deprived and under-nourished condition. These children, as the tall
girl, are stressed by the burden of their circumstances. They are
exhausted both physically as well as emotionally. The paper thin boy is
skinny. His eyes have a scared look. These unfortunate beings have
inherited only disease and bad luck from their parents. One of diseased
ones can’t even get up from the desk to recite his lesson. However,
there is one child at the back of the class who is younger than the
others. His inexperienced eyes are full of hope and he is dreaming about
playing games in the open. Apparently gloom has still not enveloped
him.
Stanza 2
The classroom walls have a dirty appearance as they
haven’t been painted for a long time. In other words, these children
inhabit a world which is dreary and depressing. On the walls are
displayed the names of people who have given donations. The bust of
Shakespeare with the background of a clear sky at the time of sun-rise
is also displayed. The walls also have scenic pictures of Tyrolese
Valley with its beautiful flowers presenting a world of the heavenly
splendor. Apart from all this, the walls also have a map revealing the
world which they view from the classroom’s windows which is foggy and
harsh. It represents a dark and bleak future with no hope for
amelioration. Their eyes can only view a narrow road which is enclosed
with a dull sky. The poet suggests that these children are trapped in a
hopeless situation and their reality is far removed from the literary
world which glistens with the beauty of nature such as the rivers and
the high land jutting from the sea.
Stanza 3
The pensive poet suddenly turns belligerent(aggressive) and feels that Shakespeare is ‘wicked’.
This is because he misleads the children. He shows them a beautiful
world of ships, sun and love which is not only unreal for them but it
has a corrupting influence on these children and instigates them to
steal and try to escape from their cramped holes. Their existence is
indeed, very sad. These emaciated children are so thin that it appears
that they are ‘wearing’ skins. The spectacles they are wearing have
glass which has been broken and mended. Their entire appearance reeks of
their deprivation. The poet shows his outrage by suggesting that the
maps on their walls should show huge slums instead of beautiful scenic
graphics.
Stanza 4
In a conciliatory tone the poet appeals to the governor, inspector and visitor to do something to improve their condition. If there is political will this map showing the beautiful world outside can become their reality too. The poet hopes the authorities would realize their moral responsibilities and free these children from their grave-like entrapments. He wants all the barriers to be pulled down; barriers that keep away true education from them. The children must be given freedom to experience the wholesome bounties of nature-view the green fields and run on ‘gold sand’. Let them read books and let them breathe in fresh air. Let them discover themselves and let them be creative so that their names can also enter the books of history. Let them find their place in the sun
Q1 :Have you ever visited or seen an elementary school in a slum? What
does it look like?
Yes, I have visited an elementary
school in a slum. The school was in a pitiful state. Its dingy and neglected
classrooms were devoid of even basic amenities like fan and lights. Every
single window was broken and bore marks of rust. How the students in the
classroom dealt with the outside noise or the winters was anybody's guess. The
ceilings too were full of cobwebs. The furniture was broken and almost
unusable. The walls of the classrooms were as shabby, malnourished and
disinterested as the students sitting in their enclosures. Even the teachers
seemed to have lost their concern both for the students and their education.
Moreover, I was shocked to know that the usage of toilets was restricted to the
school staff.
Q2 :What do you think is the colour
of 'sour cream'? Why do you think the poet has used this expression to describe
the classroom walls?
The 'sour cream' may indicate a
dirty yellowish colour. The poet uses the expression 'sour cream walls' to
represent the colour as well as the foul smell emitted by the these walls.
Q3 :The walls of the classroom are
decorated with the pictures of 'Shakespeare', 'buildings with domes', 'world
maps' and beautiful valleys. How do these contrast with the world of these
children?
The pictures of 'Shakespeare', 'buildings
with domes', 'world maps' and beautiful valley represent honor, education,
civility, beauty and vastness. While, the poverty stricken and neglected kids
in the classroom are an embodiment of the lack: they lack beauty, proper
education, development and freedom to explore the world. Even their future does
not hold any promise. In fact, there are chances these pictures may tempt them
to pursue wrong path in order to find ways to attain the things indicated by
them.
Thus, the contrast is highlighted by
juxtaposing the world as represented by the pictures and the reality of these
kids confined in a "narrow street sealed in with a lead sky", both
made present in the same classroom.
Q4 :What does the poet want for the
children of the slums? How can their lives be made to change?
He wants the children of the slums
to venture into the outside world, beyond the boundaries of their slums, and
experience a better present and future life.
The elementary school in the slum
does not serve any purpose with its poor infrastructure and disinterested
students. The poet feels that the governor, inspector and visitors should take
initiative to bring about a real change in their situation. To ensure a better
way of living for them, they need to be given proper education and freedom from
their present confines. They need opportunity, encouragement and optimism to be
able to live life with purpose and zest.
1.How
do the children of the elementary school in a slum look?
ANS. They look grim. Their faces are
pale and lifeless. The torn hair around their pale faces look like rootless
weeds. They look ill, weak, exhausted and depressed due to malnutrition. Their
eyes shine like the rat’s eyes in their diseased body.
2.How
has the poet expressed his despair and hope?
ANS. The poet has expressed his
despair through the paper-thin boy who has inherited his father’s gnarling
disease and his hope through the unnoted boy who sits on the last seat and
dreams of squirrel’s game out side the class room in the tree- trunk.
3.
Why don’t the maps and pictures have any relevance to the children of the slum?
ANS. The maps and pictures that decorate the
classroom walls belong to the world of rich. There is a big gap between the
world in which the slum children live and the world of the rich. The beautiful
wall hangings cannot cheer them as they are diseased and suffer from
malnutrition and their future full of uncertainties.
4.What
does the poet want for the children of the slum?
ANS. The poet does not want the
children to be cramped in classrooms with pictures donated by the rich that
have no relevance to their living; rather they should be allowed to explore the
world, get strength from the Sun and fight the social injustice.
Pretty Insightful. Just one question though. May I ?
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